Mature Outline -I don't know if "Complete" is the best word for Michiru. I'm not even sure that "mature" is, because Michiru is to describe "Sea King." Complete and mature don't exactly fit, and "to rise" as in a tide makes the most sense with that type of imagery. But if I'm going to make the stretch with mature I guess I could do it with complete, it seems appropriate for the story but not so for her name. P: ---- Para ustedes [for y'all] This is gonna be so stupid... sorry... ---- Intro with stuff... Past memories of Michiru dealing with fate, why the emphasis, w/grandmother thing school ends at end of March, before the new year begins again in April- has seen visions, blah blah some thing dealing with painting career, an end to her 'past' life ---- Present, in Mugen Gakuen [10th already?]. Michiru's been going here for a few years. [None of that cute sailor jr high uniform...] Parallels Distant, Haruka in her class, introducing self Michiru gets funny feelings about Haruka Watches her at lunch --- Past dealing with grandmother Michiru talks about her fate with her, insecurities about self and life Grandmother does typical reassurances, fate will lead, blah --- forward in Past, coming from the hospital grandmother ill, collapse, something like that Michiru stunned, et cetera --- asks Elza about meeting Haruka --- scene where grandmother dies --- meeting with Haruka impressions afterwards considerations of Haruka's rejection of her advancements and general avoidance of her --- Meets Setsuna at the funeral, but initally is only drawn to her --- violin concert on the ship talk with Haruka --- Michiru meets Haruka's parents under the pretense it's for a report [it was the best excuse that I could come up with :P] realizes the extent of Haruka's mother's nature and more about her actual childhood, though that is not going to be actually discussed Realizes she loves Haruka --- Past- Meets with Setsuna following their departure from the funeral Here I can do one of several things: I can actually have Setsuna come out and say that she's Pluto or else I can just have her prod Michiru in the right direction. It's up to you two, since Tim's writing Pluto's version and Amanda's doing HR. This part of the story is flexible so whatever works works. In the case of Setsuna coming out and saying that she is Pluto: Gives Michiru henshin stick or whatnot, brings her to light of the situation, her necessity to find her partner and the Talismans, demonstration of her powers, et cetera In the case of Setsuna simply prodding her without actually revealing anything, Michiru comes to light of the situation by herself, most likely due to a particularly strong vision or dream or something to that effect Stuff following, depending on which case it is --- Michiru on Haruka's last rejection of her, and how hurt she feels Something finally shoves her to make her final confrontation with Haruka --- Michiru goes to Haruka's apartment, where the dialogue is the same with Distant. Has an uncertainty about her, with some fear, but mostly resolve to Haruka about her being Uranus, only it ends with her simply telling her that she loves her --- Ending