Outline for 'Heaven Ruler' sequal to 'Distant' Dec 22, 1997 revision Ideas: Hating self and dream. Not liking being able to jump into a fight and save the victim. Neptune holds her back. Visions are nothing more than dreams that we chose to give more weight to. Work in revenge angle for kaolonite for 102. <`Tim> well, she could not concentrate as much as she should, since she is prolly a bit skeptical/cynical at first, and forgot to manifest certain parts of her fuku ;p <`Tim> or if you want to embarrass her, she forgets the blouse part of the fuku and is wearing just the bow... mosest, but revealing **( The Story )** Opening [Title] Introduction ----- "Catching Up" Art museum/concert? Life with Michiru ----- "Suspecions" Michiru leaving suddenly and at odd times Her saying off things Unexplained injuries that heal quickly ----- "Confrontations & Betrayal" Beautiful Fate? Uranus & Neptune Michiru stuck on Fate Haruka hurt with the confession, doesn't accept it Michiru demonstrates that she's Neptune Haruka refuses henshin stick They don't talk about it Running theme: 'I dunno, but it's going to be bad' F1 ----- ... a few days later "Death of a friend" Thinking about being Uranus Yamagata killed by daimon Haruka witnesses it and takes up the guise of Uranus Neptune destroys the daimon F2 ----- "Mourning" Haruka can't bring herself to continue racing Feels guilty for allowing Yamagata to die A part of her longs for revenge Foreshadow "Ending of the Dream" First time as Uranus F3 ----- "Friend or Foe: Meiou Setsuna" Confront at coffee shop :P Pulls out henshin stick and puts it onto the table to show that she is also a Senshi Haruka and Michiru have flashbacks F4 ----- "Memories..." Fmini1 Fmini2 Fmini3 ------ "A New Enemy" Setsuna spills the beans, but not enough to make coffee Death Busters Find Talismans, give to Messiah End of the World/Dark Messiah/bad stuff Reference back to Michiru's 'bad feeling' & fate Leaves Haruka and Michiru to puzzle it out on their own ----- "Ending of the Dream" Haruka confronts feelings of becoming Sailor Uranus No more racing/normal life/track/etc. Scene: Sitting on ledge with Cross, thanks God for Michiru and has mixed feeling about now having a purpose Confronts feelings of being a 'freak' Scene: Playing with the power of the World Shaking Scene: Commenting about how she looks in the fuku and who da hell came up with such a short skirt Accepts Michiru as Neptune and herself as Uranus & mission Scene: Watermelon Learning to become a Senshi, not as easy at it seems Come up with code (calm seas, restless winds, etc.) F5 ----- "Infiltration" Suspect the Death Busters are in the Delta District More training sprinkled in this scene Michiru gets more 'bad feelings' Haruka only gets a hit of them (dense ^_^;) Quick scene, not a lot of detail spent here ----- "Enemy or Annoyance? Enter the Inner Senshi" Don't remember them Decide to treat the Inners as an enemy as well 'cause they aren't powerful enough to help them --- | | Insert misc 'quick scenes' from anime to demonstate the | Outer/Inner relationship both as Senshi and real life | --- Mix battles and life Doing a paper for school and having to stop while on a roll to go fight a daimon, etc. (Could add joke later that the profs at MG didn't *want* them to finish their homework) Attitudes: ruthless with mission, manupilative of others when need be, frustrated at having no success Learn to balance both The change Haruka has gone through is both physical and mental --- | | Make print out of 109 - 111. Want to use many of those ideas. | --- ----- "Identities Reveiled" Suprise/disbelief/annoyance that it was them all along Won't let their 'friends' get in the way of the mission They know they are close at this point ----- "Talismans" Michiru has a major 'bad feeling' enough that Haruka has it as well Shock at discovering there location/disbelief/focus on mission Do the hand scene thing Brushing of hands outside Cath. but make it also to help reassure Uranus that she's doing the right thing, double meaning Neptune 'dies' and Deep Aqua Mirror is reveiled Think back to all she's had to give up get to that point Quick flashback to racing, life, family, Yamagata.. Remembers her duty and why she's done all she has; for the world Go back to F3 "Death (Part 2)" 'Kills' herself, truly believing she will die. F6 ----- "Resurrection" Wake up with the Space Sword in front of her and Neptune besides her Pluto brought them back Call forth the Grail Happy, happy, joy, joy they have what they wanted ----- "Afterwards" 'We won, but why does it feel so hollow?' Scene: Haruka sitting on ledge with the Space Sword across her lap. Asking herself this. Wondering if it all was worth it... The End ----- Kazini Naritai End Notes **( The Flashbacks )** F1 "It's a pleasure to make your acquaintance..." U & N on a date back on the Moon. Uranus is trying to be her most charming to the delight of Neptune Haruka first remembers setting eyes on Michiru... and realizes the they are the same woman ----- F2 "Death (Part 1)" The death of one of Uranus younger sibling who was attending school on the Moon. It was an accident, but feels guilty that she wasn't there to protect him/her. Parents don't blame her, but she blames herself ----- F3 "Death (Part 2)" Neptune finds a slightly whacked Uranus sitting in a secluded spot. She still blames herself for the death. 'You can't protect everyone, you can't save everyone' 'Not even the ones I care the most about' Neptune snaps her out of it, but she always is left with a bit of guilt at her early 'failure' ----- F4 "Memories..." A few quick scene stetches with Pluto in them. No Inners since they spent most their time in the outer part of the system Fmini1 Fmini2 Fmini3 ----- F5 "The old school" Uranus learning to be the wonderful person she is back on the Moon She also had early problems there, but picked it up quickly with Neptune there to encourage her. (Every guy wants to impress his girl ;) ----- F6 "Is this what it feels like to die?.." Silver Millenium where they have previously given their lives